23.04.2014, 13:10
I like the concept, the composition is good and the idea too. Judging from the pictures looks like you rush it to share the work unfinished of water zone, the underside of the platform seems incomplete. Soil lines do not meet properly. Next time make s/s without hot waves for more clean presentation. Definitely I liked your work despite the aforementioned details. Keep it up, you have a talent for this.
8/10
8/10