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Originally Posted by ross8839 Thats a very good point mate, thankyou. Apart from that, anything i could change to the design?

There's some repetition on the bottom of the page, try to edit that. You repeat "this bed" twice, in the beginnings of each sentence - if they requested it in English, you might have points taken off for that. (If it's being marked at all)

Other than that, it looks pretty complete.