Need opinions on website: - Printable Version

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Need opinions on website: - ross8839 - 18.01.2014

Hi guys and I have to present a website on a piece of furniture this Thursday for an Apprenticeship on web design so I was wondering if you guys could give me some tips and some constructive criticism and what you think of what i have so far?!

Heres a direct link to the website image.

Version 1:

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...ps72702d6e.png

Version 2:

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...pse72e6944.png

Version 3:

http://i40.photobucket.com/albums/e2...ps74ed14bb.png

Version 3 changes are I've changed the colour of the nav bar to the exact same colour as the background as well as added a gradient to the background and changing the shadow/stroke of the footer.

Re: Need opinions on website: - Forrest~ - 18.01.2014

Furniture web-sites have no portfolio section, at least I don't see the need of one. You could change that to products or whatever instead.

PS; the "2 versions" are actually the same image.

Re: Need opinions on website: - thefatshizms - 18.01.2014

I don't really like the navigation bar. The blue border on the footer and header I don't really like, try making them a greyish colour so it fits in with the rest of the website.

Re: Need opinions on website: - ross8839 - 18.01.2014

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Originally Posted by Forrest~

Furniture web-sites have no portfolio section, at least I don't see the need of one. You could change that to products or whatever instead.

PS; the "2 versions" are actually the same image.

They're not the same image at all, version 2 has a the bar at the top, as well as the two images in the middle being a little smaller.

and will try everything now.

Also, it isn't a product website, it's a website for that one particular product, so could you think of anything else to put there?

Re: Need opinions on website: - ross8839 - 18.01.2014

Sorry for double post - Uploaded version 3 with some changes.

Re: Need opinions on website: - Forrest~ - 18.01.2014

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Originally Posted by ross8839

My bad - didn't quite notice that. Anyway, an Order now or something could be there, or perhaps remove prices from the top and add it there, and put something else where prices used to be. In my opinion it would be good if the button that makes the actual profit for the company is well visible rather than it being a small input in a corner.

Re: Need opinions on website: - ross8839 - 18.01.2014

Quote:

Originally Posted by Forrest~

Thats a very good point mate, thankyou. Apart from that, anything i could change to the design?

Re: Need opinions on website: - Forrest~ - 18.01.2014

Quote:

Originally Posted by ross8839

Thats a very good point mate, thankyou. Apart from that, anything i could change to the design?

There's some repetition on the bottom of the page, try to edit that. You repeat "this bed" twice, in the beginnings of each sentence - if they requested it in English, you might have points taken off for that. (If it's being marked at all)

Other than that, it looks pretty complete.

Re: Need opinions on website: - Vince - 18.01.2014

I'd rather add another box with information somewhere to the right of the bed pictures. Fill it with Lorem Ipsum text and some arbitrary price.

Re: Need opinions on website: - HyDrAtIc - 18.01.2014

Nice work, but you should make the images smaller, and add a lot of texts, so it can be some real good site.