Constructive Criticism Please? :D
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Originally Posted by [MM]IKKE
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I only watched a part of the tutorial and these are my remarks:
  • turn up the volume a bit, it's definitely lower than any other ******* video
  • don't do anything when you're not explaining eg 0:15 selecting stuff on your desktop. I know, it might sound silly, but that's what a tutorial makes good or not: understandable for everyone, even your grandma
  • move your mouse to uninteresting places when explaining stuff eg 1:32 you're moving your mouse over all the buttons, might be confusing (or the way I explained might be more clear)
  • before you hit a button, make a circle around it, showing which button you will be clicking. Then it'll all be more understandable (you're a "fast" clicker). Would be the best to explain what the button will do while you're highlighting that button by circling around it
  • your english is comprehensible
  • didn't watch the tutorial fully, but the content itself seemed well explained
  • why the hell does your time show up a date in 2007?
Wow, thanks for all of that and I will definitely improve that and do a tutorial tomorrow improving in all of these area... and I reformatted PC and couldn't be bothered to find out what the date was. Thanks for the criticism though it helps a lot and hopefully I can improve from it... thanks once again!
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Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by BigAl - 26.11.2011, 18:55
Re : Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by Habdel - 26.11.2011, 19:09
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by Zh3r0 - 26.11.2011, 19:30
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by BigAl - 26.11.2011, 19:36
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by seanny - 26.11.2011, 19:40
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by BigAl - 26.11.2011, 20:52
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by [MM]IKKE - 26.11.2011, 21:30
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by BigAl - 26.11.2011, 22:45
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by Scenario - 26.11.2011, 22:53
Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - by BigAl - 26.11.2011, 22:56

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