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Constructive Criticism Please? :D - BigAl - 26.11.2011

Hello and I am mrproductions96 (YT Name) and I was just wondering if you could give me some pointers on how to increase the skill I have of either making a tutorial or commentary. Thanks for all your advice and I will definitely try and improve on it all.

Heres a link to thTutorial

[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2N8TVnBOHE[/ame]

Heres a link to theCommentary

[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=27jnmrmwGB8[/ame]

Re : Constructive Criticism Please? :D - Habdel - 26.11.2011

i have war in the north but it lags on my computer even in lower settings, i hate the way the guy walks and the characters, they have shitfaces : x

EDIT : Sorry for being annoying xD

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - Zh3r0 - 26.11.2011

No offence, you're annoying on that commentary

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - BigAl - 26.11.2011

Thanks Zh3r0 i will try and be less annoying in future videos and try and get it updated in this post...

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - seanny - 26.11.2011

the tutorial is the one that I will find usefull. Good Work!

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - BigAl - 26.11.2011

Than seanny. It's appreciated... Anyone else care to share?

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - [MM]IKKE - 26.11.2011

I only watched a part of the tutorial and these are my remarks:

turn up the volume a bit, it's definitely lower than any other ******* video
don't do anything when you're not explaining eg 0:15 selecting stuff on your desktop. I know, it might sound silly, but that's what a tutorial makes good or not: understandable for everyone, even your grandma
move your mouse to uninteresting places when explaining stuff eg 1:32 you're moving your mouse over all the buttons, might be confusing (or the way I explained might be more clear)
before you hit a button, make a circle around it, showing which button you will be clicking. Then it'll all be more understandable (you're a "fast" clicker). Would be the best to explain what the button will do while you're highlighting that button by circling around it
your english is comprehensible
didn't watch the tutorial fully, but the content itself seemed well explained
why the hell does your time show up a date in 2007?

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - BigAl - 26.11.2011

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Originally Posted by [MM]IKKE

I only watched a part of the tutorial and these are my remarks:

turn up the volume a bit, it's definitely lower than any other ******* video
don't do anything when you're not explaining eg 0:15 selecting stuff on your desktop. I know, it might sound silly, but that's what a tutorial makes good or not: understandable for everyone, even your grandma
move your mouse to uninteresting places when explaining stuff eg 1:32 you're moving your mouse over all the buttons, might be confusing (or the way I explained might be more clear)
before you hit a button, make a circle around it, showing which button you will be clicking. Then it'll all be more understandable (you're a "fast" clicker). Would be the best to explain what the button will do while you're highlighting that button by circling around it
your english is comprehensible
didn't watch the tutorial fully, but the content itself seemed well explained
why the hell does your time show up a date in 2007?

Wow, thanks for all of that and I will definitely improve that and do a tutorial tomorrow improving in all of these area... and I reformatted PC and couldn't be bothered to find out what the date was. Thanks for the criticism though it helps a lot and hopefully I can improve from it... thanks once again!

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - Scenario - 26.11.2011

With the first video, your voice is too low. It should match the volume of the music and I shouldn't have to turn my speakers up in order to here everything you say. To resolve this, turn up your microphone gain a little (but not too much, or it'll be distorted).

Re: Constructive Criticism Please? :D - BigAl - 26.11.2011

Real Cop... I will be updating this post tomorrow with all of this hopefully fixed with a differnet tutorial that I think will also help you...