[grand.Theft.Otto]

Good job. But I really don't think the cash, speed in MPH and name are necessary.

You should consider revising and replace those 3 with something else.

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Originally Posted by ****** 3) There are ways to get continuous lines, rather than the broken one you have at the top and bottom. Look in to character widths.

I think they are cool. I don't usually see dashed lines in a lot of scripts I find.