[jameskmonger]

Hey, I've just made a pretty basic logo for my community, and would like your criticism and comments.
Here is the "signature version":


And here is the version at the top of my forum:


Could you point out possible improvements for both, please?

[Smithy]

Both images are broken.

[jameskmonger]

I can view them fine...

[Vince]

More fx (assuming Photoshop) on both texts will fix it.

[jameskmonger]

Vince, what effects would you suggest? I currently put a stroke effect on the "roleplay" text, before merging the two together and applying a shadow (so that there wouldn't be a shadow on the "Far Out" text)

[s0cket]

More colors! You could also add something San Andreas related, such as background scenery, characters or cars.

[Vince]

Bevel and Emboss, maybe Outer Glow too.

[jameskmonger]

Okay, thanks guys, I will take this into consideration when I update the logo.

[Babul]

the shadow of "ROLEPLAY" could have applied some more transparency imo

[jameskmonger]

Babul, the shadow is the same for both.