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[MAP/INTERIOR] Sheriff/Police Department - small
Anarkien
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#1

06.07.2009, 21:52
Ok, this is my first mapping experience ever, so I thought maybe releasing it would be kinda stupid because of this being the first thing I've ever mapped.
But seeing as I want some feedback and maybe a little help ( ), I will post/release it here anyway.
I know the roof looks really, really bad, but it's because I didn't know any other objects that would look better. - and ignore the bike btw. =)
I made this for [Fort Carson RP], but if anyone else is interested in using it, be my guest, just remember that it's originally for FCRP .


Overview, briefing area/gun locker/etc.


Overview, lunch area + some desks


Overview, entrence area / waiting area / police desks + working area


Overview, working area


"Player view" entrence area + police work area


"Player view" lunch area + lockers


The roof.. Made by object id 12814 (several of them like this "/\" creates a rooftop)

Please give me serious critics as I want to learn how I can do this better next time

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.pwn - http://hotfile.com/dl/8107743/07b0ab5/Sheriff.pwn.html
It's a FS and it has a OnPlayerCommandText - type /sheriff to get to the interior.
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Jimmy1
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07.07.2009, 07:18
nice one....
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07.07.2009, 07:28
Wow, that's cool!
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Anarkien
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07.07.2009, 09:12
Oh, thank you !
Any ideas what I should have done to the roof instead of those "ground objects"?
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07.07.2009, 11:26
thanks 4 repling guys
i really appreciate your trys
Eariel:u look like u r interested
Andruska:its really worth it
Yulias Fan:Thanks 4 ur support

Great fan of all ur works guys
u and others keep the t.A.T.u legend alive
Thanks
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07.07.2009, 11:30
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Originally Posted by petusikluk
thanks 4 repling guys
i really appreciate your trys
Eariel:u look like u r interested
Andruska:its really worth it
Yulias Fan:Thanks 4 ur support

Great fan of all ur works guys
u and others keep the t.A.T.u legend alive
Thanks
You posted in the wrong thread I think..
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Anarkien
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08.07.2009, 06:02
Please give me more feedback on this as I want to learn
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16.07.2009, 11:56
No one else who want's to give me some feedback?
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16.07.2009, 14:54
I'm telling you, your pretty good for your first map.

Keep it up.
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16.07.2009, 17:26
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Originally Posted by Heerlenking
I'm telling you, your pretty good for your first map.

Keep it up.
Thanks a lot ^^,
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