[imSaint]

Palimino Creek Trailer Park
By Saint

This is my very first mapping so... Yeah! I'm looking for feedback please!

Screenshots
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Код:

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[imSaint]

I'd like some feedback please, especially since this is my very first map.

[Sparke]

Decent cages ruin it though

[iKyle]

Looks very nice! Add me on Skype: Kyle1836

[imSaint]

Thanks for the feedback guys!

[Tuntun]

Why so dirty?

[imSaint]

Quote:

Originally Posted by Tuntun Why so dirty?

Meh. Meant to be rundown. xD

[Flori]

Yea, good work.

[imSaint]

Quote:

Originally Posted by Flori Yea, good work.

Thanks man! :3

[fonia5]

Nice but you should change the fence to a broken fence.