I wrote my hopes
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Hello,

With these '2' guys ACI & LeGGGeNNdA i am posting my poem back, Its wounded but try to understand. Hats off to these 2 legends.

Here it is

"I wrote my hopes on wall."
But Rain washed it away!

"I wrote my hopes on Seashore."
But Waves swept it away!

"I wrote my hopes on clouds".
But Wind blew it away!

"I wrote my hopes on hand".
But water swept it away!

"Then after a long thinking"

"I wrote my hopes in my heart".
Now none can wash, swipe, blew it away!
A short poem, My own.

(Sorry for grammer mistakes, I am an arab).
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@ - He wrote it because he has his legs paralyzed and he is n a wheel chair, so there is no reason of making fun of that guy you joker, you're not funny or smart.
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@ Famous. - He wrote it because he has his legs paralyzed and he is n a wheel chair, so there is no reason of making fun of that guy you joker, you're not funny or smart.
No problem He wont understand buddy let him .
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Nice bro man really nice!
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#6

Nice poem there!
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@ACI - Excuse me? Am i making a fun of him? Or making a joke? No. And i'm not trying to be "funny or smart" like you've stated, only because i've posted that meme picture. I'm justing showing with it my current emotions. Although, i could write, but no, because i didn't want to.

@[vTc]Patroool - Please don't say like that, if you don't even know me. It's not like i'm a unfeeling person with out a heart. Your poem is really good and i like it.



P.S. - Your legs are paralyzed and you're sitting on a wheel chair?
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#8

This is kind of a guy with prodigy thing. A really nice starting of poetry.
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#9

Awesome Poem..
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P.S. - Your legs are paralyzed and you're sitting on a wheel chair?

Yes, I am sitting on wheel chair. Using my tablet.
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"Then after a long thinking"

"I wrote my hopes in my heart".
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Sure.
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#13

Nice
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Yes, I am sitting on wheel chair. Using my tablet.
Well i didn't know that.. please excuse me. I express my deepest condolences to your current condition.


Peace.
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Well i didn't know that.. please excuse me. I express my deepest condolences to your current condition.


Peace.
You are right, None comitted any mistake anyway nvm.

Peace.
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emokidx - talk, talk, talk: the utter and heartbreaking stupidity of words. William Faulkner to Mosquitoes
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#17

How's life in a wheel chair? Would love to listen to your story. Hope everything turns out well for you.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nGaaPJAfxD8
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How's life in a wheel chair? Would love to listen to your story. Hope everything turns out well for you.
Hope so, inshalla.
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Hope so, inshalla.
I asked you a question.
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