[Map] Pent House
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[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rT1nd6UvzCs&feature=*******_gdata"][Map]Pent House[/ame]

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Credits:
- Onfroi

Hope you all like it
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#2

It's alright, but nothing special. 6/10
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#3

It's alright.. You could have added some more objects to it.. Like plants.. or something..

Good job tho (Y)
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#4

It looks pretty nice , just add more objects
anyway good job
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#5

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Originally Posted by Djean
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It's alright.. You could have added some more objects to it.. Like plants.. or something..

Good job tho (Y)
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Originally Posted by Mark_Samp
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It looks pretty nice , just add more objects
anyway good job
Thanks, I might update this map and add some more objects
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#6

Looks cool.
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#7

It's just fine but you should've used some other object for the exterior like a brick wall or something. Also some of the objects flash when moving the camera (placed on top of each other) and as someone said you should place more objects like plants, lamps and paintings. Also the windows are only one-sided so you should duplicate it and turn it around so it's visible from both sides.
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#8

Nice work, walls are empty use paintings.. and few more objects(it seems like normal not a pent house).

4.5/10

Keep it up
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#9

can u give me the music name?

OT: Nice job
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#10

3/10 I think you could of put more effort into it, and usually penthouses have plants, multiple rooms, kitchen, sometimes a in door cinema, but it didnt really look expensive
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