My first Flyer.Rate it
#1

Hello today I made my first Flyer.Take a look



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#2

Nice
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#3

Not bad man ... Which program throu ?
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#4

Wow, I actually read the whole text... Really nice flyer!
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#5

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Originally Posted by justsomeguy
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Wow, I actually read the whole text... Really nice flyer!
Because usually 7 lines of bold text in text size 16 which don't even span 1/3 of a full page is too much for most people to actually read

OT: Not bad, but I think the upper text should have some sort of dark-red border around it like the bottom text appears to have.
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Because usually 7 lines of bold text in text size 16 which don't even span 1/3 of a full page is too much for most people to actually read
You underastemate my lazyness.. I slept with am matrass ontop of my head last week because I just didn't want to get up..
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Nice
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Originally Posted by мυ∂υℓ_вacнα
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Not bad man ... Which program throu ?
Thanks . I use Adobe Photoshop CS 5
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Wow, I actually read the whole text... Really nice flyer!
Thanks . I writted text fast so I didn`t look at grammer.
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Because usually 7 lines of bold text in text size 16 which don't even span 1/3 of a full page is too much for most people to actually read

OT: Not bad, but I think the upper text should have some sort of dark-red border around it like the bottom text appears to have.
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#8

It looks good but if you're going to publish it on your home website, you sure could correct the grammar a bit. Else, just nice, even I read it through.
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#9

A flyer is not supposed to contain a bunch of texts. A flyer is something you hand out or paste on walls to announce a party or something. It's only supposed to contain: when, where and who.
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#10

The 3rd, 4th and 5th sentences are not needed.
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