[Map] Exterior VIP Jefferson(Good For RP)
#1

Welcome To My Map,This my First Map,Useful for if you give me rep +,Sorry For bad english
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By privatmesseg at 2012-08-14

By privatmesseg at 2012-08-14

By privatmesseg at 2012-08-14

By privatmesseg at 2012-08-14

By privatmesseg at 2012-08-14

By privatmesseg at 2012-08-14

By privatmesseg at
Code
Код:
//Map VIP Create By:4everalone
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#2

Not bad..

Just suggest,better you delete the missile and the entrance door stuffs..
its more looks nicely if you delete those stuffs
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#3

I like it,just the fountain is floathing in air...Also,you got some other stuff messed up,but it's pretty much good for a begginer Good job.

I'll give it a rate ! 7/10.
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#4

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Originally Posted by AntonioStyles
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I like it,just the fountain is floathing in air...Also,you got some other stuff messed up,but it's pretty much good for a begginer Good job.

I'll give it a rate ! 7/10.
Thanks
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#5

It's a pretty good map. I have to say, that I have spotted a few errors in this map (such as the floating fountain). I like everything, excluding the errors and the two military type weapons on the roof of the building (it wouldn't make much sense for a club to have military grade firearms). One thing I really enjoyed was the vegetation, the large amount of vegetation (personal preference). I give it a solid 7/10.
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#6

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Originally Posted by Kevin Frankenberger
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It's a pretty good map. I have to say, that I have spotted a few errors in this map (such as the floating fountain). I like everything, excluding the errors and the two military type weapons on the roof of the building (it wouldn't make much sense for a club to have military grade firearms). One thing I really enjoyed was the vegetation, the large amount of vegetation (personal preference). I give it a solid 7/10.
Thanks Bro
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#7

nice map
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#8

Not bad at all...I'd say delete the missiles and fix the floating fountain
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#9

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Originally Posted by SampzzonE
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nice map
Thanks

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Originally Posted by JordanMaddox
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Not bad at all...I'd say delete the missiles and fix the floating fountain
Thanks , I do not have time to fix it , if you could fix me so thank you
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#10

I Did not Test the Map. But the SS are Looking Good

8.5 /10

Edit +Rep
Just Keep it up!
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