[Map] House on VineWood
#1

This is my first map..
Give me advices and score [1-10]..

Pictures: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=FRL9ACWA

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#2

8/10 looks clean but could use more things.

oh btw people probly havent commented because you didnt post any pics i know you provided download link but people dont like downloading screens. -.-
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#3

use www.photobucket.com or use www.tinypic.com
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#4

i upload the pic's for ya!
pics::
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and pretty cool
9/10
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#5

9/10 it's very cool

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#6

Nice
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