[MOSensei]

" ISLAND WITH MANSION "
Virtual Project Development
Sensei's Maps
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Code:
http://pastebin.com/8dEfwQyX

Images:

[Crayder]

This is not your best work. It's very geometrical, which islands should not be at all. I like the idea.

Look, you have done the few things that make all island maps fail (ex. rocks to fill in space; repeated, ugly, identical, not-rotated, etc, ruining... rocks).

[MOSensei]

Excuse me? Did I just said above that this map is my best work? This is just my stack file of map that I am sharing with you, this was made last year.. anyways, thanks for the critics..

[Deathlane]

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Originally Posted by MOSensei Excuse me? Did I just said above that this map is my best work? This is just my stack file of map that I am sharing with you, this was made last year.. anyways, thanks for the critics..

He's referring to the other maps you released

EDIT: Looks pretty nice tho

[justice96]

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crayder This is not your best work. It's very geometrical, which islands should not be at all. I like the idea. Look, you have done the few things that make all island maps fail (ex. rocks to fill in space; repeated, ugly, identical, not-rotated, etc, ruining... rocks).

I must say that you are too fast in judging others

[Phaze]

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Originally Posted by Crayder This is not your best work. It's very geometrical, which islands should not be at all. I like the idea. Look, you have done the few things that make all island maps fail (ex. rocks to fill in space; repeated, ugly, identical, not-rotated, etc, ruining... rocks).

Have you seen what you do? lol..

Quote:

https://sampforum.blast.hk/showthread.php?pid=2755597#pid2755597

Anyways not bad.

[MOSensei]

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Originally Posted by Phaze Have you seen what you do? lol.. Anyways not bad.

Leave him anyways, lol.. he have a freedom of speach..

@Crayder: I have something to say with you, If you comment negative, please see your work first if it is good or not... that all, thanks again for the critics..

[MattyMatty]

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Look, you have done the few things that make all island maps fail (ex. rocks to fill in space; repeated, ugly, identical, not-rotated, etc, ruining... rocks).

Rocks to fill in space is not bad if they are done correctly, they should be of the same color. stone-gray rocks for green islands and desert ones for desert islands

[Crayder]

I was comparing this to your other work. I wan't trying to offend you.

About my work? Those were old shit jobs. I even said so in the thread.

[MOSensei]

Ey whats wrong with this, we are far from the topic mates.. lol.. anyways, thank you for all of your critics.. I appreciate it!

[MOSensei]

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Originally Posted by Crayder I was comparing this to your other work. I wan't trying to offend you. About my work? Those were old shit jobs. I even said so in the thread.

Like wise, this is also my old work..

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Originally Posted by HeLiOn_PrImE Give Crayder some space guys, cause he's right! The idea is good, but you fail at picking the wrong objects for creating an island. You could at least try to retexture some of them. A lot of people like to spam loads of rocks to fill gaps. Your map is different, but it still has to many pieces of one rock model. The beach is well made, but the rest almost looks entirely artificial. Below are the parts of the map that can be improved. 1st picture: That bridge can be continued with a set of stairs to the upper platform. You ended it in those rocks, and it looks awful. 2nd picture: A good shape, but the textures of each set of objects are a fail. You can try to retexture them to look like they're fit together. 3rd picture: To many grey rocks that are basically one model. Replace them with something else, and retexture the desert rocks. It will look way better. And before you tell me to look at my own work, let me tell you that I do that every day, looking for ways to improve.

Thanks for the critics mate, actually this is just my old work as I've said in the first place, I've worked this in the time that I'm new from mapping..

[HeLiOn_PrImE]

Well, I didn't like the way everyone jumped on Crayder.
He's not my pal, or anything, but I felt like I needed to say something. Glad it's settled.

[T_John]

very nice mapping boundaries but would rather fix here

[MOSensei]

As I've said mate, this was my old file, and why does the location is right there? cause exact location will be in that place, however that place have been already mapped by someone on my previous server, so I decided to change that location.. anyways, thanks with that mate..

[Crayder]

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Originally Posted by HeLiOn_PrImE Well, I didn't like the way everyone jumped on Crayder. He's not my pal, or anything, but I felt like I needed to say something. Glad it's settled.

It was ight, they're both newbs... :P

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Originally Posted by Yakuzaa very nice mapping boundaries but would rather fix here

You can easily move the map. There are many map moving scripts around here if you can't do it yourself.

[DDR3]

Nice work.

[S2aid]

I like this house in the last screen . Good job. '

[SpikY_]

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crayder This is not your best work. It's very geometrical, which islands should not be at all. I like the idea. Look, you have done the few things that make all island maps fail (ex. rocks to fill in space; repeated, ugly, identical, not-rotated, etc, ruining... rocks).

he has the point. you have added many rocks!

[ImperioHosting]

Good job.