[RajatPawar]

Hey guys.
I had a pretty out of this world idea while doing something, and I have written since 10 years or so, ranging from small paragraphs to this. I completed about 8 chapters, and I really want to have some feedback over it. It's the lack of actual contributors to this project that has me, a bit demotivated. Everyone I asked has no interest in reading books (yes, sadly) and so, my last resort is the lovely SA-MP forums. I would like some feedback, please!

1) If you have no interest in books, please leave!
2) If you have a bit of a 'experience' in reading (apart from kid stories), please do read and comment!
3) You have to log in using your ******** account. Please note that NO TRACKING or REVEALING of personal information will be done. Just login to read it, and gtfo. (kidding ) You can comment here.

Cheers,
and if anyone actually takes the effort to read this, thanks a ton!

NOTE: It has some typos, doesn't give you the right to point out how I can write a book. It's called being human.
Examples are extra letters, repeated words, etc.

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[Coltmaster]

"When a superpower is behind a single guy"? Are you English?

[RajatPawar]

Definitely not. I know it sounds a bit retard - ish, but there's a hidden motive as to why I have written that. So do spare me!

[Cameryn]

Always loved reading books and will also read this one. Summary looks interesting. Good Work!

[RajatPawar]

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Originally Posted by Cameryn Always loved reading books and will also read this one. Summary looks interesting. Good Work!

Thanks for taking the time out. If you reach the end of the (till yet completed) book, I'll keep writing. Though the summary seems very old school, (to me atleast) the plot's better!

[SchurmanCQC]

I can write 5,000 words in two days. This took you ten years?

[Cameryn]

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Originally Posted by SchurmanCQC I can write 5,000 words in two days. This took you ten years?

Well you just don't put random words. You need to think first then write then think again.

[MP2]

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Originally Posted by SchurmanCQC I can write 5,000 words in two days. This took you ten years?

He said he started writing 10 years ago. He didn't say 'I started writing this 10 years ago'.

[Ibrahim.E]

Great , I will give it to my teacher as it is my project !

[RajatPawar]

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Originally Posted by SchurmanCQC I can write 5,000 words in two days. This took you ten years?

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Originally Posted by MP2 He said he started writing 10 years ago. He didn't say 'I started writing this 10 years ago'.

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Originally Posted by Cameryn Well you just don't put random words. You need to think first then write then think again.

Yes, cameryn, you are a hell lotta right. It took me some hours to research a few facts to write my 6th or 7th chapter. Some maths too, it's not like you fire away something !