[dadadaamy]

Hi all . I want to show you my first love poetry.
When i loved her , one night , i got a paper infront of my face and a pen.
This is what i saw after i opened my eyes :


When i met you , i was stunned
When i saw you i was drunk....
But 1 thing i knew that time....
It was like a murder,like a crime...

I Realized that i love you too much...
I was crazy , in the clutch !!!
I wanted to show you what i feel
I will show you , i can't be only "HEEL"

I don't know what to do...
I have a mind , made of cartoons like scooby doo...
Im so soft , i am so dumb...
I love you so much , that i have numbed...

My heart goes gore , my mind goes off
And i start to breath , i strarted to hope...
Im turned off , and i am so blind
I have a heart, that only you can find

I actually love you more than i know
I actually have more winding that i can blow...
I actually found my new good side
I actually found a new life that i can ride!!

You're my life , you're my solution
And all of this means one conclusion :
The conclusion is the one above :
I ACTUALLY FOUND MY REAL LOVE .

You are smart , you're the perfect one
Always when im with you , i get some fun =)
You laugh at me , you don't scream at me
You dont hate me, and that's what i can see..

I have more to discover , more than i thought...
You're not simple , you've got such a sweet mouth :X
Your eyes its like a golden gate
Behind these gates is TWIST OF FATE...

You're 110% of my heart!
I can't make you love me , and that hurt...
I would give you , the saturn , the jupiter, the moon !
But now i'm a spirit. see you soon !

I will stalk you days and nights, i'll be your angel!
I will protect you of everything,disees,devil...
I will kill myself for you , i'll smash my own skull.
Just to make you happy and peacefull.


I hope you like it.
If you like it , say " LIKE " in your post. If i get 10 likes i will compose a new one.
Love always win.

[Jansish]

Really touching. I almost shed a tear.

[Niko_boy]

tbh i never like poetry and stuff in books which we have to study for school.
But a poetry got no relation with school as above i LOVE it <3

[dadadaamy]

@Janish , Don't cry , love cries for you

[Calgon]

Relevant:

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[vassilis]

[justsomeguy]

As this is a poetry topic I feel obligated to stay formal as much as I can:

[dadadaamy]

Say it , i dont care . This is what i felt like . I AM NOT AFRAID TO LOVE !

[justsomeguy]

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Originally Posted by dadadaamy Say it , i dont care . This is what i felt like . I AM NOT AFRAID TO LOVE !

Great for you, but stop tabbing space before you hit a punctation as , or . or !