[Map] Car Service(My second map)
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[NB] Amaxx
The idea: [NB] Amaxx
Production time: 1Hour and 30 min.
Objects Used: 115 Object (No 0.3c)
Pictures:










Код:
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I hope it is better than the first.
And Comment, criticism and praise all is well accepted
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#2

it's nice interior and I liked the glass.

For second map it's really nice. Keep doing more work.
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#3

I nice attempt for second project. You have creativity and that is the main requirement for a mapper.

I'll mention some mistakes/bugs so you can advance your skills.

1st) Put some walls arround the glass. It will make it more realistic.
2nd) Cover the space above the two doors. It will make it nicer
3rd) At those columns, change SLIGHTLY the x and y , so the one , won't be INSIDE the other.
At the moment if you move near it, the one object moves ontop of the other, and looks like the object is " flashing "
4th) Same as 3rd, for the roof though.

Keep it up!!
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#4

Tanks,I will try to continue do better maps.And Thanks for your explanation for this bug, because I did not know how we do not blink
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#5

Good work.
I love the details inside the garage. Keep it up!
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#6

Very nice 10/10
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#7

Thanks.see my other maps and evaluate them
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#8

very nice for second map
9/10
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#9

Thanks
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#10

Wow... you are an awesome guy! keep up the good work!

P.S. Once I put it in my script, it some of the objects didn't appear
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