25.11.2010, 11:06
Actually this tutorial needs much improvement. It would be perfect if you talked with a clear voice and nice pace, yes.
But even if you don't have that possibility you can improve it greatly.
Like people have said, don't use notepad or similar. Put a little effort in it, and do a little editing after recording, and add text as captions or bubbles or whatever instead.
The fact that you just wrote it into a file, with no paragraphs or seperators + that zooming effect just made it horrible to read.
Also the music. Music for such things should be just for background. Now I'm not going to argue about musical taste, I too listen to some rap/hiphop, although real one, not this BS. But in this case it's really not a good choice.
If you wish to use hiphop background, use instrumentals only. And promote real artists, not some corporate bling-bling monkeys.
[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN2MQya1OCA[/ame]
But even if you don't have that possibility you can improve it greatly.
Like people have said, don't use notepad or similar. Put a little effort in it, and do a little editing after recording, and add text as captions or bubbles or whatever instead.
The fact that you just wrote it into a file, with no paragraphs or seperators + that zooming effect just made it horrible to read.
Also the music. Music for such things should be just for background. Now I'm not going to argue about musical taste, I too listen to some rap/hiphop, although real one, not this BS. But in this case it's really not a good choice.
If you wish to use hiphop background, use instrumentals only. And promote real artists, not some corporate bling-bling monkeys.
[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TN2MQya1OCA[/ame]