[samgreen]

I would like to offer a chance for some of you to have your scripts reviewed and analyzed line by line. I am a professional programmer by day, and I have been working with Pawn inside of SA:MP scripts for about four years now. Obviously I won't be able to review all scripts, but I am willing to take a look at the first few posted here. This is not an offer to fix broken scripts, which many others on this forum can help you with. I am offering to optimize and explain small changes in code.

Who will be brave enough to give me some code to start with?