[Ritzy2K]

As your first tutorial. I think you did a good job. I liked the way you named the variables. I also liked how you provided the complete code in pastebin for newbies to poke around with. However, I think you need to have a little more explanation about how stuff worked. And I'm not sure if SA-MP forums messed it up but identation isn't the best. Also uh, I think use ZCMD.

3/5