16.05.2015, 03:01
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I was comparing this to your other work. I wan't trying to offend you.
About my work? Those were old shit jobs. I even said so in the thread. |
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Give Crayder some space guys, cause he's right!
The idea is good, but you fail at picking the wrong objects for creating an island. You could at least try to retexture some of them. A lot of people like to spam loads of rocks to fill gaps. Your map is different, but it still has to many pieces of one rock model. The beach is well made, but the rest almost looks entirely artificial. Below are the parts of the map that can be improved. 1st picture: That bridge can be continued with a set of stairs to the upper platform. You ended it in those rocks, and it looks awful. 2nd picture: A good shape, but the textures of each set of objects are a fail. You can try to retexture them to look like they're fit together. 3rd picture: To many grey rocks that are basically one model. Replace them with something else, and retexture the desert rocks. It will look way better. And before you tell me to look at my own work, let me tell you that I do that every day, looking for ways to improve. |