05.03.2015, 15:00
right,so where shall i start? 
Right,background background has alot of textures ontop, yellow to green dosen't work much on the background,next time get something that fits together. Text - this is what you mostly didn't do properly, it's not really read able and the colors aren't matching...so colors again,better font..and put some textures over the text and stretch the texture at the bottom to the end of the picture because i can see the texture ending not at the bottom but a couple centimetres higher.But overall..good attempt,need alot of practice :P
Right,background background has alot of textures ontop, yellow to green dosen't work much on the background,next time get something that fits together. Text - this is what you mostly didn't do properly, it's not really read able and the colors aren't matching...so colors again,better font..and put some textures over the text and stretch the texture at the bottom to the end of the picture because i can see the texture ending not at the bottom but a couple centimetres higher.But overall..good attempt,need alot of practice :P