[toXioneer]

Dude you need to come alive, you sound like bored indian working in some kind of customer service. You sound like you're reading a poem for your class... Let's players are fun when they have their own character, laughing, as if they are really laughing with you.

I used to do let's plays, and the only reason people liked it was that I was being active, instead of instructions, I was talking extremely randomly and free, if it helps, ask your friends to play with you. Let's plays with more than 1 person is always fun to watch.