[AviPeker]

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Im A Beginner Scripter Tell me if there is any errors or something to fix \ improve.

// SIMPLE PM \\

Код:

///// Script By AviPeker //////
 /// ~~~ SIMPLE PM ~~~ ///

#include <a_samp>
#include "../include/gl_common.inc"

#define COLOR_RED 0xFF444499
#define IN_COMING_PM     0xFFFF22AA
#define OUT_GOING_PM     0xFFCC2299

//------------------------------------------------

public OnFilterScriptInit()
{
	print("\n Simple PM loaded .\n");
	return 1;
}

//------------------------------------------------

public OnPlayerCommandText(playerid, cmdtext[])
{
	new cmd[256];
	new	tmp[256];
	new Message[256];
	new gMessage[256];
	new pName[MAX_PLAYER_NAME+1];
	new iName[MAX_PLAYER_NAME+1];
	new	idx;
	
	cmd = strtok(cmdtext, idx);

	// PM Command
	if(strcmp("/pm", cmd, true) == 0)
	{
		tmp = strtok(cmdtext,idx);
		
		if(!strlen(tmp) || strlen(tmp) > 5) {
			SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_RED,"ERROR: /pm [id] (message)");
			return 1;
		}
		
		new id = strval(tmp);
        gMessage = strrest(cmdtext,idx);
        
		if(!strlen(gMessage)) {
			SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_RED,"ERROR: /pm [id] (message)");
			return 1;
		}
		
		if(!IsPlayerConnected(id)) {
			SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_RED,"Player not Found");
			return 1;
		}
		
		if(playerid != id) {
			GetPlayerName(id,iName,sizeof(iName));
			GetPlayerName(playerid,pName,sizeof(pName));
			format(Message,sizeof(Message),">> %s(%d): %s",iName,id,gMessage);
			SendClientMessage(playerid,OUT_GOING_PM,Message);
			format(Message,sizeof(Message),"** %s(%d): %s",pName,playerid,gMessage);
			SendClientMessage(id,IN_COMING_PM,Message);
			PlayerPlaySound(id,1085,0.0,0.0,0.0);
			
			printf("PM: %s",Message);
			
		}
		else {
			SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_RED,"ERROR: You cant PM yourself");
		}
		return 1;
	}
}

///// Script By AviPeker //////
 /// ~~~ SIMPLE PM ~~~ ///