I wrote my hopes
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Hello,

With these '2' guys ACI & LeGGGeNNdA i am posting my poem back, Its wounded but try to understand. Hats off to these 2 legends.

Here it is

"I wrote my hopes on wall."
But Rain washed it away!

"I wrote my hopes on Seashore."
But Waves swept it away!

"I wrote my hopes on clouds".
But Wind blew it away!

"I wrote my hopes on hand".
But water swept it away!

"Then after a long thinking"

"I wrote my hopes in my heart".
Now none can wash, swipe, blew it away!
A short poem, My own.

(Sorry for grammer mistakes, I am an arab).
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I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 13:45
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Erwin. - 28.03.2014, 13:49
Re: I wrote my hopes - by ACI - 28.03.2014, 13:52
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 13:54
Re: I wrote my hopes - by MuhoX - 28.03.2014, 14:02
Re: I wrote my hopes - by UnknownOwner - 28.03.2014, 14:03
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Erwin. - 28.03.2014, 14:15
Re: I wrote my hopes - by ACI - 28.03.2014, 14:21
Re: I wrote my hopes - by UfsDev - 28.03.2014, 14:32
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 14:35
Re: I wrote my hopes - by emokidx - 28.03.2014, 14:43
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 14:45
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Arjanz - 28.03.2014, 15:11
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Erwin. - 28.03.2014, 15:17
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 15:19
Re: I wrote my hopes - by ACI - 28.03.2014, 16:00
Re: I wrote my hopes - by AlonzoTorres - 28.03.2014, 16:05
Re: I wrote my hopes - by ACI - 28.03.2014, 16:23
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 16:46
Re: I wrote my hopes - by AlonzoTorres - 28.03.2014, 19:35
Re: I wrote my hopes - by LeGGGeNNdA - 28.03.2014, 19:41
Re: I wrote my hopes - by AlonzoTorres - 28.03.2014, 19:45
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 19:48
Re: I wrote my hopes - by AlonzoTorres - 28.03.2014, 19:51
Re: I wrote my hopes - by Bingo - 28.03.2014, 19:54
Re: I wrote my hopes - by linuxthefish - 30.03.2014, 02:32

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