[Map] ==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script
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Originally Posted by xxSwissxx
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It's cool and all, but honestly - I feel like you edited an Interior that really didn't need to be edited.
Anyway, I looked at all your other Mapping Videos - keep up the good work c:
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It's fairly decent item placement but there is some bad choices like the tires are just blatantly out of place design wise and it's pretty boring in terms of being unique. The reason is the objects are not customized in any way there needs to be some strong use of SetObjectMaterial() also combining objects to make a new object. One thing is in SAMP that we've seen all the objects so maps tend to lose a lot of luster in my view by not doing everything possible to have unique object configurations in terms of set materials or even at least setting the color parameter or both.

Here is how I would break it down.

Object Placement: 6/10
Object Design (SetObjectMaterial): 0/10
Effort: 7/10
Uniqueness: 3/10
Concept: 7/10

5/10 Overall

I'm sorry if you don't like my review but I'm being honest next map you'll be able to focus on the lower points so it's probably good to know what is bad otherwise you'll keep making the same mistakes over and over.
Yeah, you guys are right. It isn't my best work, but it was my biggest, and most time consuming, and by the time I started on the bedrooms I started not caring how it looked, and just wanted to get a public opinion. Before I start on another project, I will do some R&D to see what I really WANT to do, and not what I THINK I want to do. It seemed like a great project, but as soon as I finished the garage, I was stumped, and only did the house bit-by-bit, until I finally finished it one night, and scripted doors for it. I will do better next time, and probably stick to exteriors.
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==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script - by Aerotactics - 06.07.2013, 11:38
Re: ==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script - by Aerotactics - 06.07.2013, 21:36
Re: ==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script - by Pottus - 07.07.2013, 01:59
Re: ==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script - by xxSwissxx - 07.07.2013, 02:06
Re: ==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script - by Aerotactics - 07.07.2013, 03:00
Re: ==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script - by _CJ_ - 23.04.2014, 11:52
Re: ==[RP] Luxury Home==Interior+Exterior+Script - by MpK - 23.04.2014, 15:36

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