18.01.2013, 05:20
I see this is your first release, and it sure looks like it. (no offense)
First of all, the script is pretty basic (just like any other "first release" scripts), but there is a few problems in the post:
1: Yellow text on white is REALLY hard to read (at least for me, i don't know if the problem is just in my eyes)
2: The whole description is in one big chunk, wich can be difficult to read if you write a bit longer desc
3: Write a bit longer description
People want to know what they are downloading, so if you can't provide any pictures or videos of your script, the text must be very descriptive.
4: The english on the post is hard to read in some places. The spelling isn't quite right in many of the words.
5: Make your post look interesting Have titles, sub-titles, descriptions, pictures, maybe a video or two, etc.
6: SA-MP Forums is not the best place to host your files at. Pack the files as a .zip and upload them to solidfiles.com & add a pastebin link. Pastebin is very important because then we can see the script without downloading anything, and we can review your scripting easilly.
Fix those little points, and you will succeed!
First of all, the script is pretty basic (just like any other "first release" scripts), but there is a few problems in the post:
1: Yellow text on white is REALLY hard to read (at least for me, i don't know if the problem is just in my eyes)
2: The whole description is in one big chunk, wich can be difficult to read if you write a bit longer desc
3: Write a bit longer description
People want to know what they are downloading, so if you can't provide any pictures or videos of your script, the text must be very descriptive.4: The english on the post is hard to read in some places. The spelling isn't quite right in many of the words.
5: Make your post look interesting
Have titles, sub-titles, descriptions, pictures, maybe a video or two, etc.6: SA-MP Forums is not the best place to host your files at. Pack the files as a .zip and upload them to solidfiles.com & add a pastebin link. Pastebin is very important because then we can see the script without downloading anything, and we can review your scripting easilly.
Fix those little points, and you will succeed!