[Jansish]

Well first of all, the clips were too short, i suggest you buy fraps. it also gets rid of the "www.fraps.com" at top.
second of all, those textdraws were annoying as fuck, imo you should've filmed in a movie server or smth.
third, the camera movements were a bit too sharp, the placement was fine I guess.
but the "story" was quite good. so I guess it evens out.


I suppose it was okay, not great, not too bad, just... average.