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For your friend:

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-Hi James! What's your origins?
-Hi Mike, I am from China and over there, the life is very different compared to the U.S. , we do not have the same mode of life, nor the same language, and even a different culture. I was born in a poor family, my parents were dressmakers in a plant high marks, they worked really hard. They finish late and wake up very early to work and be able to feed my family correctly and make us live like other people. Here in America, you have to work less, and in the factories, the work is not in assembly lines like in China. The food in America is different as well. For example, Americans eat a lot of in fastfood, but not in our country! We do not live way the Americans do, our mode of life is very different. We neither speak the same language. Life in the U.S. is more expensive that in China. Another difference is that, in China, all people are friendly, while people here aren't very sociable.

I hope you compare both texts, so you learn from your mistakes
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