[[HiC]TheKiller]

A few errors with your code :P. You're missing a pair of brackets in your fourth code snippet and your fifth code snippet is missing a closing bracket. Also, this

pawn Code:

SetPlayerPos(playerid,Float: X, Float: Y, Float: Z:); // X, Y, Z are the coordinates they will be teleported to when they walk into pickup.

You should tell them that they need to replace the Float's as well as the variables, people might get confused .
Otherwise, it's a OK tutorial for your first .