12.11.2011, 23:29
I thought I'd make a list, it seems like it'd be appropriate in this case:
- Resolution - but you already know that
- Fonts - a very poor choice of them. This isn't 2001 any more, you can't just use Times New Roman everywhere and expect it to fit in to the design
- Flash is dying - you should be looking in to HTML5 and CSS3 - and javascript. Adobe announced that they're dropping support for mobile devices i.e. tablets, smartphones, etc, which are going to become increasingly more significant over the coming years
- Poorly structured sentences/bad use of the English language - even on a temporary page, language matters. Don't bore your visitors, and keep your messages short and sweet, where possible
- The name - not about the design, but the name you've chosen sounds really generic, dull and quite frankly crap - I'd rather hear about 'Super Cool Roleplay' than 'Extreme Servers' - and that's even more of a redundant exaggeration
- Disgusting header - the buttons are hard to find, and honestly I didn't see them when I first looked at the image - you need to make them more distinctive, who's going to notice them otherwise? And again, the fonts and use of language
- Opacity - perhaps an improvement to the design, other than what I've already mentioned, would be to change the opacity of the background to something less bright - to possibly draw attention away from the background