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2. Don't list the same features everyone else has. List the new features that players won't find on other servers

Perhaps change this to: List all of their feature and highlight the unique feature

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5. Don't ask for donations in your ad. Why would we join a server that is always going to be hitting us up for money?

You can join the server without donation. Asking for donation is normal.

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6. Be professional and have everything you need already, like a ventrilo or teamspeak, a website/forums and hosting. Oh, and for God's sake, have a script. It costs around $5-$10 bucks a month to get a ventrilo, you really can't afford that? A

I can't afford that. Perhaps you can remove "you really can't afford that?".

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9. Make your name something memorable. San Fierro Roleplay II is not going to stick in people's mind. However, Naked Roleplay probably will. Choose a great name that describes your server that people will remember.

ftw naked lol


The rest, good point.