19.04.2011, 17:36
You got some skills and the video is not bad at all, but in my honest opinion:
The intro is somewhat too long - In fact, it was half of the video. If you want to keep the spectators interested in the video try shortening it (10 seconds should be OK)
The video has too much color saturation - A bit of color saturation gives a nice feel to the video, but too much can ruin it.
At 0:40 try using another kind of transition, that one just doens't fit into the video. Sometimes videos look even better without transitions.
Don't consider this as a destructive opinion, your title says "Help me get better at editing!" so I guess this is the kind of critique you want.
But in overall, as i said above, the video is not bad at all. If ******* still had video rating in stars, i'd give you a 4 out of 5.
The intro is somewhat too long - In fact, it was half of the video. If you want to keep the spectators interested in the video try shortening it (10 seconds should be OK)
The video has too much color saturation - A bit of color saturation gives a nice feel to the video, but too much can ruin it.
At 0:40 try using another kind of transition, that one just doens't fit into the video. Sometimes videos look even better without transitions.
Don't consider this as a destructive opinion, your title says "Help me get better at editing!" so I guess this is the kind of critique you want.
But in overall, as i said above, the video is not bad at all. If ******* still had video rating in stars, i'd give you a 4 out of 5.