2/10....It's just way to bad made...the render is suckish, bad rendered, bad quality, text looks very sharp, try using ant-aliasing.As Rampage said.
Try using better fonts, try playing with the Blending modes.
Try using more stocks, renders, abstract wallpapers to make it look, better.
Also, try using Depth effect

(Simply make a new layer, take the Gradient Tool and do a Gradient, must be white and black, then set beldingmode to Overlay