Created HTML Site
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Hello Guys,

I just made a HTML Site which is basic.
I had made this for Nostalgia.

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Please comment on it.

Regards,
Avi Raj.

EDIT Pic Now :-
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#2

It has a nice, uncluttered look. The smaller font is too hard to read though and goes against the ethos of simplicity and clean design.

Also it says at the bottom all images are by you, but that crumpled paper background isn't
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#3

This is simple and nice.
Try changing the text font.
And as Silent told, remove copyright from images.
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#4

The font doesn't match together, even if they are the same.. and AFAIK ink styled fonts isn't what I call classic, it's far beyond classic
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#5

Just out of curiosity, does the "Design" copyright also apply to fonts, because, you know, a font is a design I think.
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#6

a) The logo is too big, minimize it down a bit.
b) The "Forums" and "Home" buttons are too big, maybe minimize those also.
c) The font is a bit too difficult to read. I would use a more easier, and more compact font.

Everything else is quite nice!
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Originally Posted by Si|ent
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It has a nice, uncluttered look. The smaller font is too hard to read though and goes against the ethos of simplicity and clean design.

Also it says at the bottom all images are by you, but that crumpled paper background isn't
Thanks, I will change the font.
And about background, I forget it :P will change.

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This is simple and nice.
Try changing the text font.
And as Silent told, remove copyright from images.
Alright bro.

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The font doesn't match together, even if they are the same.. and AFAIK ink styled fonts isn't what I call classic, it's far beyond classic
I will see.

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Just out of curiosity, does the "Design" copyright also apply to fonts, because, you know, a font is a design I think.
Fonts are for everyone, site with Aerial says Copyright reserved.
So, I don't see any problem using them.

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a) The logo is too big, minimize it down a bit.
b) The "Forums" and "Home" buttons are too big, maybe minimize those also.
c) The font is a bit too difficult to read. I would use a more easier, and more compact font.

Everything else is quite nice!
Thanks, will decrease the size of images.
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#8

Not bad
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#9

The font is too big and it is not suiting at all.

OFF: Good to see that people are still using Windows XP, remembers of my old days.
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Originally Posted by Emmet_
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a) The logo is too big, minimize it down a bit.
b) The "Forums" and "Home" buttons are too big, maybe minimize those also.
Couldn't disagree more. The mahoosive logo etc looks(looked) great.

The second image is a step backwards. The logo text is too small ,it's lost all of its impact and the plain text below (though much clearer now) is too big! All it needed was a simple font change for that
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