[LeGGGeNNdA]

Hey pple im sharing my new map in here....please give me your opinion and tell me some suggestions for next one
My brother made me do this...so if it looks bad dont say that i failed :P
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Code

pawn Код:

CreateObject(1696,-449.00000000,1443.59997559,19.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,82.00000000); //object(roofstuff15) (1)
CreateObject(974,-448.79998779,1440.69995117,22.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,332.00000000); //object(tall_fence) (1)
CreateObject(974,-448.00000000,1447.80004883,22.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,17.99584961); //object(tall_fence) (2)
CreateObject(16667,-465.50000000,1457.19995117,23.70000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,34.00000000); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (1)
CreateObject(16656,-462.59960938,1439.09960938,23.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,263.99597168); //object(a51_rocketlab) (3)
CreateObject(2395,-467.00000000,1450.69995117,20.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,354.00000000); //object(cj_sports_wall) (1)
CreateObject(2395,-467.00000000,1450.80004883,21.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,353.99597168); //object(cj_sports_wall) (2)
CreateObject(2277,-463.29998779,1439.50000000,21.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,356.00000000); //object(frame_fab_2) (1)
CreateObject(1736,-471.50000000,1435.09997559,22.29999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,82.00000000); //object(cj_stags_head) (1)
CreateObject(1828,-461.60000610,1434.50000000,20.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(man_sdr_rug) (1)
CreateObject(14446,-469.79998779,1434.80004883,21.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,84.00000000); //object(smokes_bed) (1)
CreateObject(1661,-460.60000610,1433.90002441,24.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(htl_fan_rotate_dy) (1)
CreateObject(1661,-465.79998779,1434.40002441,24.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(htl_fan_rotate_dy) (2)
CreateObject(2232,-469.00000000,1429.69995117,21.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,176.00000000); //object(med_speaker_4) (1)
CreateObject(2028,-454.39999390,1437.90002441,21.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(swank_console) (1)
CreateObject(2091,-454.29998779,1437.90002441,20.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,264.00000000); //object(tv_ward_med_1) (1)
CreateObject(2100,-455.70001221,1428.30004883,20.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,214.00000000); //object(med_hi_fi_2) (1)
CreateObject(2232,-455.20001221,1430.30004883,21.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,263.99597168); //object(med_speaker_4) (2)
CreateObject(2232,-455.29980469,1429.50000000,21.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,263.99597168); //object(med_speaker_4) (3)
CreateObject(2232,-457.39941406,1428.19921875,21.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,175.99548340); //object(med_speaker_4) (4)
CreateObject(16151,-463.29998779,1429.59997559,20.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,264.00000000); //object(ufo_bar) (1)
CreateObject(2232,-458.19921875,1428.29980469,21.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,175.99548340); //object(med_speaker_4) (5)
CreateObject(2232,-470.89941406,1429.89941406,21.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,175.99548340); //object(med_speaker_4) (6)
CreateObject(3390,-464.70001221,1447.40002441,20.39999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,354.00000000); //object(a51_sdsk_ncol1_) (1)
CreateObject(2976,-465.00000000,1446.50000000,21.30000114,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(green_gloop) (1)
CreateObject(2921,-396.70001221,1243.19995117,11.80000019,0.00000000,0.00000000,118.00000000); //object(kmb_cam) (1)
CreateObject(16782,-465.50000000,1450.30004883,22.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,262.00000000); //object(a51_radar_scan) (1)
CreateObject(2605,-464.89999390,1444.59997559,20.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,264.00000000); //object(polce_desk1) (1)
CreateObject(11665,-463.19998169,1438.43994141,21.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,84.00000000); //object(kb_chair03ext) (1)
CreateObject(16667,-478.00000000,1431.50000000,23.70000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,111.99719238); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (2)
CreateObject(16667,-461.70001221,1420.50000000,22.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,193.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (3)
CreateObject(16667,-479.00000000,1431.50000000,26.70000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,111.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (4)
CreateObject(16667,-478.00000000,1431.50000000,17.70000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,111.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (5)
CreateObject(16667,-478.00000000,1431.50000000,9.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,111.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (6)
CreateObject(16667,-478.00000000,1431.50000000,2.29999995,0.00000000,0.00000000,111.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (7)
CreateObject(16667,-478.00000000,1431.50000000,-3.20000005,0.00000000,0.00000000,111.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (8)
CreateObject(16667,-478.00000000,1431.50000000,-3.20000005,0.00000000,0.00000000,111.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (9)
CreateObject(16667,-471.70001221,1418.19995117,-3.20000005,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (10)
CreateObject(16667,-471.70001221,1418.19995117,2.29999995,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99035645); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (11)
CreateObject(16667,-471.70001221,1418.19995117,8.60000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99035645); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (12)
CreateObject(16667,-471.70001221,1418.19995117,13.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99035645); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (13)
CreateObject(16667,-471.70001221,1418.19995117,19.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99035645); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (14)
CreateObject(16667,-471.70001221,1418.19995117,26.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99035645); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (15)
CreateObject(16667,-471.70001221,1418.19995117,29.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99035645); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (16)
CreateObject(16667,-471.69921875,1418.19921875,29.20000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,151.99035645); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (17)
CreateObject(16667,-486.60000610,1447.90002441,9.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,109.99462891); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (18)
CreateObject(16667,-486.60000610,1447.90002441,15.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,109.98962402); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (19)
CreateObject(16667,-487.10000610,1445.50000000,20.79999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,129.98962402); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (20)
CreateObject(16667,-483.29998779,1445.19995117,-2.59999990,0.00000000,0.00000000,115.98474121); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (21)
CreateObject(16112,-474.00000000,1444.19995117,28.39999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(des_rockfl1_) (1)
CreateObject(16667,-462.20001221,1419.59997559,25.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,193.99108887); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (22)
CreateObject(16667,-478.10000610,1462.00000000,24.70000076,0.00000000,0.00000000,25.98962402); //object(des_rockgp2_14) (23)
CreateObject(1305,-466.10000610,1420.09997559,29.29999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock01) (1)
CreateObject(1305,-464.00000000,1420.30004883,29.29999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock01) (2)
CreateObject(1305,-461.89999390,1420.80004883,29.29999924,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock01) (3)
CreateObject(3409,-395.50000000,1243.00000000,5.40000010,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (1)
CreateObject(3409,-395.70001221,1242.80004883,6.19999981,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (2)
CreateObject(3409,-395.70001221,1242.80004883,7.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (3)
CreateObject(3409,-395.70001221,1242.80004883,7.80000019,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (4)
CreateObject(3409,-398.60000610,1241.09997559,5.09999990,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (5)
CreateObject(3409,-394.10000610,1239.50000000,5.09999990,0.00000000,0.00000000,302.00000000); //object(grassplant) (6)
CreateObject(3409,-397.50000000,1237.69995117,4.59999990,0.00000000,0.00000000,301.99768066); //object(grassplant) (7)
CreateObject(861,-400.50000000,1241.00000000,4.50000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(sand_plant02) (1)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,5.69999981,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (9)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,7.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (10)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,8.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (11)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,6.30000019,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (12)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,5.30000019,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (13)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,6.80000019,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (14)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,7.59999990,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (15)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,5.90000010,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (16)
CreateObject(3409,-395.20001221,1248.09997559,5.19999981,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (17)
CreateObject(3409,-395.19921875,1248.09960938,5.19999981,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(grassplant) (18)
CreateObject(1304,-449.70001221,1447.09997559,26.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (1)
CreateObject(1304,-450.50000000,1446.40002441,26.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (2)
CreateObject(1304,-451.20001221,1445.40002441,26.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (3)
CreateObject(1304,-451.19921875,1445.39941406,26.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (4)
CreateObject(1304,-451.60000610,1444.40002441,26.10000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (5)
CreateObject(1304,-451.70001221,1443.40002441,25.60000038,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (6)
CreateObject(1304,-451.79998779,1442.90002441,24.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (7)
CreateObject(1304,-451.89999390,1444.19995117,24.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (8)
CreateObject(1304,-451.70001221,1445.40002441,24.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (9)
CreateObject(1304,-451.10000610,1446.30004883,24.89999962,0.00000000,0.00000000,0.00000000); //object(dyn_quarryrock02) (10)

Thanks Again

[Private200]

Good one 9.9/10 Keep it up .
Waiting for your next mapping

[LeGGGeNNdA]

Thanks buddy......I have some better ones...but this one is actually given the opinion from my brother...he told me do this, that and i just puttted the objects :P

thanks anyway

[Epic_Mickey]

Laaaawll, Lordz get your arse over here and say its bad!



just kidding, ya know that

Nice map

[PineAbeles]

Cool!

[LeGGGeNNdA]

thanks guys

[chuck005]

I find it a little unrealistic but it looks good. Maybe you could try to make it look more realistic.

[LeGGGeNNdA]

ill try chuck

thanks rony

[VIP475]

hm,it's something like secret hidden house in the rock!

+Rep!

[[LB]GoLd_DeViL]

Good work legg 9.99999999/10