[xskyowned]

Author Brent Loskoz Aka xskyowned


http://pastebin.com/XwyFg4C3


Small Map of an aquarium. This is my first map and I accept all criticism, I used my map to be involved in selecting mapper for Atlantis City an italian server.

[ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=og58OA1N8IY"]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=og58OA1N8IY[/ame]

[PhilippinesRoleplay]

its cool bro, be proud of it like me...
im also a newbie mapper but many servers hiring me for there rp servers.

[wShake]

It seems fairly decent. Though, If I am not wrong, the sea-animals are floating over the ground, behind the glass. My suggestion for you to add some water (there is a swimming pool object that you cna use, rotate the x-y-z, so that you can put it right behind the glass. With that, people who visits the Aquarium will have a more realistic feel (as they will see the water behind the glass, and the animals behind it, so that it will make them think the Glass is holding the water) Also - if you don't mind me saying, it can be hell of a better, if you can change the Door-item (as it looks more like a, meh... you got my point) And lastly - adding some additional items to be spreaded around the map could make this map fantastic.

[xskyowned]

Quote:

Originally Posted by wShake It seems fairly decent. Though, If I am not wrong, the sea-animals are floating over the ground, behind the glass. My suggestion for you to add some water (there is a swimming pool object that you cna use, rotate the x-y-z, so that you can put it right behind the glass. With that, people who visits the Aquarium will have a more realistic feel (as they will see the water behind the glass, and the animals behind it, so that it will make them think the Glass is holding the water) Also - if you don't mind me saying, it can be hell of a better, if you can change the Door-item (as it looks more like a, meh... you got my point) And lastly - adding some additional items to be spreaded around the map could make this map fantastic.

thanks for the tips .. can you give me the id of the water? sorry for bad english but i'm an italian mapper . you have other suggestions for me? to do more maps? thanks again

[xskyowned]

Quote:

Originally Posted by wShake It seems fairly decent. Though, If I am not wrong, the sea-animals are floating over the ground, behind the glass. My suggestion for you to add some water (there is a swimming pool object that you cna use, rotate the x-y-z, so that you can put it right behind the glass. With that, people who visits the Aquarium will have a more realistic feel (as they will see the water behind the glass, and the animals behind it, so that it will make them think the Glass is holding the water) Also - if you don't mind me saying, it can be hell of a better, if you can change the Door-item (as it looks more like a, meh... you got my point) And lastly - adding some additional items to be spreaded around the map could make this map fantastic.

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Originally Posted by PhilippinesRoleplay its cool bro, be proud of it like me... im also a newbie mapper but many servers hiring me for there rp servers.

Thanks

[-CaRRoT]

Good job man as your first map , But what will we see if we jump behind the glass ?

[xskyowned]

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Originally Posted by Breto Good job man as your first map , But what will we see if we jump behind the glass ?

It's Not Roleplay XD Thanks ahahha

[Marin_Franolic]

Pretty, very nice for 1st map!

[Djean]

I love this, Could be improved but i still like it 10/10

[MrLazyAss]

Love it , 9/10 - i bet Version 2 will look awesome!