[Smithy]

I've been working on this for the last hour, could you tell me your opinions?

[img width=453 height=768]http://files.uploadffs.com/d/9/6c95972a/Preview.jpg[/img]

[LuxurioN™]

My opinion? I found it very beautiful.

... But I liked most your signature

[Donny_k]

The cards are very good, nice layout and soft tones.

The text underneath the cards I don't get, is this like a flyer/leaflet or a front page etc ? (something which shows what you do, dunno the name hehe)

I only comment on that as the white text with the larger font doesn't go with the flow IMO, I think you should lower the font size to match that of the "Delivering busine......." text or maybe a little larger but not much and then center it, a bit of a lower tone for the white would be better also as it jumps out at you. Just my two cents dude, I couldn't do better and I'm just giving you my opinion as you asked for it.

[Striker_Moe]

These cards are pure ownage, I have never seen so nice cards.

[Fresh9884]

can you like make one for me my dad and me got a business i know its kinda sa-mp off topic but these card layouts own!

[Smithy]

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Originally Posted by Donny The cards are very good, nice layout and soft tones. The text underneath the cards I don't get, is this like a flyer/leaflet or a front page etc ? (something which shows what you do, dunno the name hehe) I only comment on that as the white text with the larger font doesn't go with the flow IMO, I think you should lower the font size to match that of the "Delivering busine......." text or maybe a little larger but not much and then center it, a bit of a lower tone for the white would be better also as it jumps out at you. Just my two cents dude, I couldn't do better and I'm just giving you my opinion as you asked for it.

They're for future reference, showing what you can do with the PSD, nothing more, nothing less. They are just for reference.

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Originally Posted by Fresh9884 can you like make one for me my dad and me got a business i know its kinda sa-mp off topic but these card layouts own!

Sure, erm, hit me up a private message and i'll be happy to help.

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Originally Posted by Mo3 These cards are pure ownage, I have never seen so nice cards.

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Originally Posted by © Tђэ LυxυяiσN™ My opinion? I found it very beautiful. ... But I liked most your signature

Thank you, means alot guys.

[Klutty]

Harry, as always, they look really good.

[Redirect Left]

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Originally Posted by Mo3 These cards are pure ownage, I have never seen so nice cards.

I have, there is a machine in my local bus station that does similiar designs...

[Smithy]

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Originally Posted by Redirect Left Quote: Originally Posted by Mo3 These cards are pure ownage, I have never seen so nice cards. I have, there is a machine in my local bus station that does similiar designs...

Do you always bring people down RDL?

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Originally Posted by Klutty Harry, as always, they look really good.

Cheers mate.

[UberSocks]

They're really something.

Well done!

How long have you been doing graphic design?