[Arsham7]

Hey guys, Just made a tune.

[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=araMRqLWdzU[/ame]

[Mr187]

1. You need to rhyme a whole lot better.
2. You need to flow and make sentences.

Oh and yeah i do make raps, Mainly Chicano Rap but yeah its not as easy as you think gotta work hard on it more than you are and get a better microphone like a studio one and popfliter and such which i got my own studio costed about 700 bucks total but sounds a whole lot better.

Also need to make a whole song not 1 min.

Example of rhyme's and sentences be like this

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Now the mission is grab the ammunition and watch it be murder a homicide on the west side you can call it a one eight seven but either way your ass is going to heaven so lay down and pray lets get this straight you can hate all you want but you and your soul mate are taking straight eight plates

Lol I love writing up shit it takes alot of practice and such, even gotta learn words make up words and such.. Its a good start but you need to start working hard on it even grab lyrics of songs you like from other rappers learn them and rap over it with same lyrics and once you practice lots it'll get easier and befor you know it you'll be making verses in just like 20-30 minutes and will be killer lyrics.

[Arsham7]

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Originally Posted by Mr187 1. You need to rhyme a whole lot better. 2. You need to flow and make sentences. Oh and yeah i do make raps, Mainly Chicano Rap but yeah its not as easy as you think gotta work hard on it more than you are and get a better microphone like a studio one and popfliter and such which i got my own studio costed about 700 bucks total but sounds a whole lot better. Also need to make a whole song not 1 min. Example of rhyme's and sentences be like this Lol I love writing up shit it takes alot of practice and such, even gotta learn words make up words and such.. Its a good start but you need to start working hard on it and once you practice lots it'll get easier and befor you know it you'll be making verses in just like 20-30 minutes and will be killer lyrics.

yea... I feel you.