[Martin_Smith]

im making a command to kill someone wen they are on the floor, (onfloor Variable) and wen i try to use this it doesnt work, i think its sumin to do with giveplayerid..... i dont get errors the command just doesnt work.. any problems people see in this code?

Code:

dcmd_floorkill(playerid,params[])
{
	new string[128];
	new giveplayerid;
	new tmp[256];
	new idx,tmpit[256];
	tmpit = strtok(params,idx);
	giveplayerid = strlen(tmp);
	if(!strlen(tmpit))
	{
 		SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_RED,"Usage: /floorkill[playerid]");
 		return true;
	}
 	if(OnFloor[giveplayerid] == 1) return SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_RED,"That is not on the floor");
 	
	new playername[MAX_PLAYER_NAME];
	GetPlayerName(giveplayerid, playername, sizeof(playername));
	
 	new onfloorname[MAX_PLAYER_NAME];
	GetPlayerName(giveplayerid, onfloorname, sizeof(onfloorname));

	new Float:px, Float:py, Float:pz;
	GetPlayerPos(giveplayerid,px,py,pz);
			

	if(PlayerToPoint(3.0,playerid,px,py,pz))
	{
		format(string, sizeof(string), "you Hover your foor above %s's head...", onfloorname);
		SendClientMessage(playerid, COLOR_LIGHTBLUE, string);
		
 		format(string, sizeof(string), "you see %s leg above your head...", playername);
		SendClientMessage(giveplayerid, COLOR_LIGHTBLUE, string);
		
		SetTimerEx("beingkilled", 1000, 0, "i", playerid);
	
	}
	else if(!PlayerToPoint(3.0,playerid,px,py,pz))
	{
	  SendClientMessage(playerid,COLOR_RED, "you are not close enough to kill");
	}
  return 1;
}