My Website Construction
#1

Good construction background?
[img width=959 height=768]http://harrykirkby.co.uk/images/Background.jpg[/img]
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#2

Looking good
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#3

Not bad.
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#4

Fix the typo and make the ribbon more ribbon like. Maybe actually a web 2.0 star that everyone has to use by e-law.
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#5

A bit too basic, as in simple background, downloaded font etc.
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#6

Needs a lot of work, looks like you just went into paint shop pro and added some lights at the bottom then took a yellow bar from some other picture and added it on top of your design, font has no dimension to it at all. Looks very amateur.

-Ma[N]ifest
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#7

The ribbon or w,e it is doesnt look like a ribbon, or w.e x.x

But its ok

Maybe you should perhaps focus on as potlight or something comming fromt he light machine which you could just see ??
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