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Need feedback for my work. - SoFahim - 13.09.2015

Hi guys,
I have created a website. I want your feedback . So, I can know my working problem. I will improve more


VirtualLifeRp.cf
Please check and tell me how good or bad it is. Tell me my problems too


Re: Need feedback for my work. - mw3samp - 13.09.2015

very basic


Re: Need feedback for my work. - SoFahim - 13.09.2015

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very basic
Yes. It is, But the style/


Re: Need feedback for my work. - Arastair - 13.09.2015

Indeed it is basic but the style is cool


Re: Need feedback for my work. - Beasthian - 13.09.2015

The style is wonderful but yeah its basic.


Re: Need feedback for my work. - Michael B - 13.09.2015

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I have created a website.
Surely you did, but the template isn't created by you. The website looks quite messy. The server's logo (font especially) does not fit with the template and also the template is not very attractive, as you didn't finish editing it. As suggestions, you should edit or remove the ****** map from the bottom, and finish the blog. Also, try to change the logo or template's secondary color (cyan) as does not fit with SA-MP.


Re: Need feedback for my work. - Kapersky™ - 13.09.2015

Simple but cool


Re: Need feedback for my work. - PoisonedJuice - 13.09.2015

Grammar correction: Your virtual lifes*


Re: Need feedback for my work. - SoFahim - 13.09.2015

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Indeed it is basic but the style is cool
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The style is wonderful but yeah its basic.
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Simple but cool
Thanks. I know it besic, because I am not pro about this.

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Surely you did, but the template isn't created by you. The website looks quite messy. The server's logo (font especially) does not fit with the template and also the template is not very attractive, as you didn't finish editing it. As suggestions, you should edit or remove the ****** map from the bottom, and finish the blog. Also, try to change the logo or template's secondary color (cyan) as does not fit with SA-MP.
Template was created by one of my known person, who lives on my country. the LOGO is not fit , I know. I am trying to make good one. Blog is still writing. It will take like 2days.

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Grammar correction: Your virtual lifes*
Lives it fit with the name. Maybe


Re: Need feedback for my work. - PoisonedJuice - 13.09.2015

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Thanks. I know it besic, because I am not pro about this.


Template was created by one of my known person, who lives on my country. the LOGO is not fit , I know. I am trying to make good one. Blog is still writing. It will take like 2days.


Lives it fit with the name. Maybe
What? It's not correct to say lives on that sentence, on any way possible.