Hello. I am releasing my first map attempt, a bank interior. I would like some feedback in return
Please don't release the map and claim it as your own.
pawn Code:
/*--- Mapping by AphexCCFC ---*/
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/*--- End of Mapping ---*/
There is one little issue about this interior, because it was created high up in the sky, birds keep flying through just underneath the roof.
This is a nice map only thing I can see which might need improving is to change the floor or wall in different rooms as it looks basic. But other than that its good 8/10
Thanks guys, yeah killer but the only thing with using SA-MP mapping is that you have to use walls as floors and lay them down and there's not many choices.